I: Hello

Hello P1

Hello P2Hello P3


If you have the time, or the energy, or enough power on your electronic device, help me out? I’ve got a few things I want to know and I need other people’s eyes for that.
How does my character come across? (Do you feel for/like/dislike them and why?)
Do you want to read more or are you quite content to stop here?
Thank you for letting me use your eyes.

II: Hello  III: Hello  IV: Hello  V: Hello  VI: Hello  VII: Hello


  1. I really enjoy your style. It’s very unique, and super descriptive.. Saying it is interesting or unique, I think doesn’t give it credit. I’d say it’s weird. Very lucid, very trippy. And I obviously mean that as a compliment. 🙂

    Keep writing!


      1. We’re all amateurs, right? In all aspects of life, whether we are willing to admit or not. 🙂 None of us have this figured out. I think you’re fantastic and I think your style is refreshing. It’s so different from the norm and that’s so awesome to see when everyone is so concerned with “fitting in.”

        Seriously, keep up the good work!

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      1. I know, right! I hear it often enough out in the world, but it only has that warming effect when it is used out of recognition rather than accusation! 😉


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